I really like your background image as it clearly fits the "music" theme. You have done a good job of cutting out the picture of the headphones too. To improve this final piece of coursework, I would suggest thinking about your use of colour and what it "says" about your product. Eg silver = technology, blue = for boys etc.. You have a few too many colours going on so it looks a bit muddled, and the smiley face makes it seem too "kid-like" I think. Feel free to make these improvements in your own time to improve your coursework grade.
I really like your background image as it clearly fits the "music" theme. You have done a good job of cutting out the picture of the headphones too. To improve this final piece of coursework, I would suggest thinking about your use of colour and what it "says" about your product. Eg silver = technology, blue = for boys etc.. You have a few too many colours going on so it looks a bit muddled, and the smiley face makes it seem too "kid-like" I think. Feel free to make these improvements in your own time to improve your coursework grade.
ReplyDeletePRODUCTION = 2/5 = D